Tuesday, 21 June 2016

Driving through Asthma

I have been Reading BREATHLESS. By Bernard Beckett Nonfiction .                                                                                                                                                                                  It is a boy that has asthma and he has a hard time to play. And his dream was to play in the finals but on the training he had to go to the hospital. It was the day for the game. He asked his coach can I play no sorry  son you can't  play. He got sad and angry

My favorites part  was when they were in the trolley and the main character  in it.
And My favorites part was when they try to break into the tigger clubroom to put their team Jersey on the team mascot. It was funny when the winger brother we to go and Chase then and the main character was in the trolley .


  1. Kia ora Takuira,
    Thanks for a great intro by you and Tim to your book review. Your movie hooked me in to reading your review on your blog. It was great that Matua Chris shared it in the Kaikohekohe Google + Community and I got to see it. Do you know anyone who has asthma? I bet by reading the story you can see how frustrating it would be if it made it tricky for you to play sport. What was their team mascot? Did they manage to get their jersey on it?

  2. Hi Takuira and Tim
    I like the way you and Tim explain on the video about asthma and the way you are keen to still play rugby. And for myself I've got asthma as well. It's not going to stop me from playing sport so thank you very much. Blog u later.

  3. Kia ora Takuira
    This is Miss Waho from Gilberthorpe School in Christchurch.
    I was glad to see this as I have recently seen this text and have been thinking about using it for one of my Reading groups. I like how you have used a video to share some of your learning. I will try using this in my class.

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  5. I like how you have used a video to share a little bit about the book.
    It is creative.

  6. I like hows you used a videos to share your learning.
    It is helpful because now I know a little bit about the book.

  7. when you grow up your going to be a good story writter and probbly a good sports player

  8. i like how you guys did the story