persuasive writing by Takuira and Sonny

I Believe that we should have and New school building and parks

This because it will look better than the other schools in kaikohe and then heaps of kids will want to come to our school and because we will have and bigger class Room.

What I think is best I think that we should have and better park for the Juniors and Upgrade our park and so the kids will play on it.and we should have new toilets  because   and we should have those air blowing things to dry your hands.

The other reason why. I think we should have new building because we have had our school for pretty long. now that why we should have and new building. And another reason why we should have building it will be like and new future.

By Sonny and Takuira